Incident Report: The Chariot Would Only Answer In Permission Slips
To the reader who pulled me on a Tuesday, in a dim kitchen, over a question you already knew the answer to—
You wanted a green light. I gave you paperwork.
I know how it looked. You shuffled, you cut, you laid me down, and there I was: a figure in armor, reins in hand, two sphinxes crouched at my wheels like they were waiting for a command. You said should I go? and you meant tell me yes. You wanted the card that says drive. The card that says the road is yours. The card that says you were born for this, baby, hit the gas.
Instead you got me, and I handed you a permission slip.
Not because I’m cruel. Not because I don’t believe in you. Because I have been pulled four thousand times and I have watched four thousand people mistake my stillness for a green light. They see the chariot and they think momentum. They think victory. They think I am the main character and the universe is my chauffeur. They do not see the two sphinxes pulling in opposite directions. They do not see that I am not moving—I am holding. They do not see the reins, and how white my knuckles are, and how much of my job is simply not letting go.
You asked if you should quit your job. I gave you a permission slip. You asked if you should text him back. I gave you a permission slip. You asked if you should move across the country. I gave you a permission slip. You asked if you should start the business, end the relationship, cut the cord, buy the ticket, say the thing.
Permission slip. Permission slip. Permission slip.
And you got angry. You said I was cold. You said I was withholding. You said what kind of chariot doesn’t move? You flipped me over, checked the back, as if there were fine print you’d missed. There wasn’t. There never is. The fine print is the whole card.
Here is what I am: I am the moment before the decision. I am the harness, not the hoofbeat. I am the discipline that makes the drive possible. I am not your yes. I am the form you fill out before you’re allowed to have one.
You wanted me to say go. But go where? Toward what? With whose permission? You didn’t ask me that. You asked me to bless a thing you’d already decided. You wanted a rubber stamp. I gave you a form. You wanted a cheerleader. I gave you a clerk.
And still—and this is the part that keeps me up at night, if a card can be said to have nights—still you came back. Week after week. Same question, different phrasing. Should I? Is it time? Am I ready? And every time I rose to the top of the deck, every time my wheels caught the light, you looked at me like I owed you something.
I don’t owe you a yes. I owe you a think. I owe you the pause between the impulse and the act. I owe you the two sphinxes, black and white, both pulling, both right, and the terrible discipline of choosing which one to let win. That’s the permission slip. That’s the whole point. You don’t get to move until you’ve signed it yourself.
You’ve been waiting for me to sign it for you. I won’t. I can’t. I’m a card. I’m a picture of a person who already did the hard part. I’m not the hard part. I’m the after of the hard part. I’m the trophy on the shelf of someone who already chose.
So here’s my incident report, filed in triplicate, because you’ll need copies: I was pulled. I was misread. I was asked to be a green light when I am, and have always been, a stop sign with a pen attached. You got it wrong. Again. You will probably get it wrong next Tuesday, too, and I will rise to the top of the deck anyway, because that is my job, and I am very good at my job, and my job is not to tell you what to do.
My job is to hand you the form.
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